Feedback the Draft from Class teacher

 We were showed our draft film to Sir. Overall, Sir told us that it was a good effort however, he did spotted our film and tell us to do the correct somethings. The list he told us in our draft film:

• to decrease the use of the same sound and to add a variety of different sound scores which create the suspense instead of creating the drama.
• to add some effects such as in the library about the entity's POV shot
• Blur effect or distorted effect and lasting to use color grading it to show the entity's view. 
• the flashback scene; we should use the flashing effect and to add more and detail of cinematography

With these improvements , we will hopefully be able to improve our product.